Want some feedback on a model

Hey this a model of a future type gun im working on, not quite finished and hasnt got a skin yet but just wanted to see how you think its coming along.

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is there a brigther version? It's almost black on this screen.

looks very very high-poly. interesting design, but it's hard to say a whole lot at this point.

julz

I really like the design! looks very cool
critique from my side: the polies don't seem to be distributed evenly. I'd round some edges and add detail to the main gun, but take some polies of those wires...the base has way too many edges. it should be rounded, or at least have more faces at the edges. what I mean is instead of:
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keep it up!
Micha

The lower barrel would be impossible to shoot from... it has no chamber behind it

i cant see anything like portal_kivauy did say its almost totaly black

Im going to do a bit more work fix a few of these things up and ill post a brighter image, and Towelie i feel like an idiot haha thats very true ill fix that up to.

I think it has got a clean design, not a super fancy texture but actually this makes it look quite good
Btw,

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The lower barrel would be impossible to shoot from... it has no chamber behind it

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Maybe you could turn it into a super futuristic gun, the ones with no chamber behind them

Cheers

Frazzle