Childrens Game

Heres a childrens game I have been working on.
Please comment, all my family will say is thats its amazing.
Hope u like it.

OK first off you haven't told us anything about the game at all, try doing that. Some comments about the screens:
To be blunt i think the first 2 screens look terrible, they have low-res textures, with a mixture between low and mid poly models (e.g. Low poly tree, but mid poly fountain), i would advise making the really low poly stuff higher and more detailed, maybe make some different textures ,and definitely change the trees\bushes the textures make them look terrible.
I will say good work for completing a working demo, and try and consider these improvements.

Oh right about the game, well you walk, jump and throw apples at the bad guys.

It looks fun . The overall brightness is a littlebit intense though.

LoL, but what's the point? throwing apples? lol.

OK , thats look very funny.
But to crazy,but GOOD TOO!

i like this community... a little bit more positive!
I think too thats it a little bit too brightness but it look soo (good) crazy that it can break rules so its okay. Low textures are not the problem toonshader dont need it... so work on i wish me a crazy HUD (yoshi story an co will help).. so work on! Night ZZZZZZZzzzzzzzz

nice a peacefully game without blood or sth. like that.
Go on with your work.^^


Gruß Tails