My Band - Blutschatten

well, maybe some of you remember, that i was talking about cd recording a while ago.
well, we are finished
you can listen to two songs and watch one musicvideo of my band on our myspace site
http://www.myspace.com/blutschatten
i am the lightsaber guy, but in the video i still have long hair XD

we are doing a mix between melodic black and death metal, with a twist of thrash and dark mixed in. i like it. i took metroid metal as inspiration

i am actually not really looking for critics, i just wanted to share my music with you. if you like it, its even better

not bad, im not a huge metal fan but i do listen to it perodically... usually when im in the mood to hurt something, but thats besides the point since i dont understand german, should ask, what is the story with the music video, didnt get it just by the images alone and i since i cant understand what your saying it makes it hard.

its what you see in the video from her personal point of view
have some roughly translated lyrics

her eyes are empty
her view is dead
her voice is whispering
her lips are bloodred

again he is coming
to be with her
to own her
to use her

lord let me die
save me
hear my plea
but the lord wont listen
he wont save her
he wont her hear plea
her tears and her suffering
he cannot se
noone can see hear
noone hears her scream
only he will get her
she gets ready
her tears are disappearing
in the face of time
noone will save her
only death makes her free

cold eyes
staring at her
she is his
she never was free

cold fingers
gliding on her
she feels he is near
now he is in her

lord let me die
save me
hear my plea
but the lord wont listen
he wont save her
he wont her hear plea
her tears and her suffering
he cannot se
noone can see hear
noone hears her scream
only he will get her
she gets ready
her tears are disappearing
in the face of time
noone will save her
only death makes her free

only death makes her free

only death makes her free

cold fingers
gliding on her
she feels he is near
now he is in her

the soul is dying
every night
again and again
until she wont wake up again

lord let me die
save me
hear my plea
but the lord wont listen
he wont save her
he wont her hear plea
her tears and her suffering
he cannot se
noone can see hear
noone hears her scream
only he will get her
she gets ready
her tears are disappearing
in the face of time
noone will save her
only death makes her free

thats it basically...
there sure would be a better way to translate it but... oh, well^^

oh my god... naja die musik ist nicht schlecht, das ist allerdings so die metal-ecke die ich nicht so mag. habt ihr keine sängerin oder so?

i like it, especially Schwarzer Messias, although i prefer higher pitched vocals

Ok, I gave it a listen. Not bad, really. The sound could use some work, but nobody can expect you to have highest quality studio sound, of course.
I don't dig the black-metal-ish vocals too much, though. I like growling and shouting and Converge-style-incomprehensible barking and everything, but not black metal vocals ;D.
The video could be a LOT worse than that. Pretty good job there. Still looks quite amateurish, but whatever. I've seen much worse videos than that. But the Golf 5 and all those other new cars in the beginning kinda spoil the atmosphere ...

Really cool Spike! I like all music, although I don't regularly listen to metal, this is pretty darn good. Past the audio quality(a tad muddy), it sounds as good as the other top bands that I heard. The first song is the best, keep it up!