Can't really give too much detail on this project, but I'm looking for some constructive criticism.



Tell me what you think of this scene. Kind of a Basement Office area. No Shaders, mainly models.

Back to work..
Thanks everyone.

Looks great, all the props and textures look right, the only thing I'd sugest is try to do is add some grime. I have a hard time doing this myself but every once in a while you should see a sprite on a repeated texture (like the wall) of a tear, dirt, ect.

Thanks for the comment. I'll try that when I get a chance and post some pictures. thanks!

it looks good, but its a little monotone. a few pictures on the wall, or documents, maybe a few chairs and it looks way better...

I miss some shadows but It looks great

Thanks for all your comments everyone, here are some more things that I've done regarding this project. Just some Misc. Models and scenes. I've got several more detailed rooms but I just wanted to follow-up with my last post since I was in a rush for work.


My Microscope...


My Security Camera




Haven't Yet applied a texture to this


Finally the Elevator!!!!!

Thanks for you comments everyone!

for a damaged room, it looks too clean. The dirt models are ok, but the textures are to clean. YOu could put there a lot of tiny dirt. If the door was blasted there should there should be also damage around the door, like cracks in the walls and maybe black dirt. In the last shot the black shadow looks strange without a pipe or something.

The rest is looking good. Interesting project. One more thing. Closed up models like the microscope should be much more detailed.

Hey it looks nice what kind of game will it be?
looks great

Thanks for the posts. Its a FPS with a little 3rd person action for certain elements. The Door is not blasted open and the place hasn't been blown apart. But I can't really go into that

I'll have some more detailed pictures up shortly.

EX Citer: What kind of detail could you suggest for it? I'm shooting for a slightly cartoony/photo-realistic look. I'm not really to great in photoshop and I pretty much learn as I go, I generally prefer to program.

Here are some updated pictures. Obviously, the hand is far from being finished.



Can you turn the sprinklers on?



This image above is an updated version of the pictures above. A lot has changed. I don't want to show the unfinished rooms, but when the pictures are up I hope it makes people say, "wow."



This is the unfinished Tow Motor. The actual WIP of this is a lot more complete, but not available for showing.

Anyhow, I always appreciate comments, good and bad.

Thanks-
Albert