Hi Everyone,

I did this character as a class assignment, and plan on reworking it for A6 (adding more detail to the head, giving the character ears and something more to wear, etc.). I would love to hear what you think of the model. (Yes, I know he's really skinny; so is the friend who posed for the mesh).

Thanks for your input!

Dan

good model...
could have a texture..
anyway.. looks very nice! keep it up!

Thanks :-) I still have to unwrap it. I'm gonna sleep for a while to give my arms a rest, then it's unwrapping and texturing all day tomorrow.

The upper body looks too long. The hands are too small.

It is a good start though.

He has quite a big one

The length of the upper body was a style choice (plus it matches the source imagery), but the hands are definitely too small.

And Fireball, yep! :-)

A friend of mine posed for this, and I figured better to error on the generous side.

Hands and Head need to be bigger.

And he looks a bit like "long dong Silver",
maybe you rework that too.

sorry. But I cannot believe that your friend has such a long upper body and such a small head. Maybe it is because of the perspective of your camera or of your render screenshot. But this is simply not possible. Look here:



You see that the legs are too short and the upper body too long and the head might be too small. Because of the small head the body even looks longer.

ok. I could not resist. Look here:



I reworked your pic. In my photo montage the upper body is shorter, the neck is wider, there is a little bit of biceps and arms are shorter.

Decide yourself which version looks more "appealing".

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He has quite a big one

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Lmao same thing I thought when I first seen it. Looks like hes wearing a bananna hammock(speedo) or pair of whitey tightys. If you plan on putting him in pants Id adjust that area. Unless of course hes a rock star wearing leather pants

Next to Franks image the proportions do seem quite a bit off also.