Hellloo Guys!

I made an ICU room for a game but i dont know much about level design.
Can you point out some problems in the pics that may be bad for the game?

here are 3 pics:







dont worry about the monitor screens, . This guy is not having a baby.
Ill change that

Nice screens, problems? uhm what about the polycount?

Dusty

heh, i got 50k. but lowest framerate i got was 45.

I think, the electric power (fusebox?) elements on the top of the walls are not placed in the sickroom.
though it is a sickroom it's a little too clean to me.
Thats the bad things - on the other hand it is a very nice room and the models are high detailed and nice textured.
The arrangement is realistic, the shadows smooth.

Sick persons get healthy faster if the can look through a window!

good work!

mercuryus

Thanks!

But I think ICUs dont have windows. Oops, sorry, some have windows.
Ok im wrong with the elictric boxes

but without them, the walls look empty?
Is there something im missing?

Maybe you could arrange the objects new and make an inside-window?
Make a monitor with a small avi-movie of a pulse-line (that adds some action in the level) or a animated cardiopulmonary-maschine, if it is desired...

mercuryus

the water tank looks like its filled with play-dough. make it transparent or something to make it actually look like transparent blue plastic with water inside it.

is ur 45 fps taken from actually running it with collision detection etc? it does look a lil hi-poly. the idea of inside windows sounds good. maybe tone down the specularity of some things? everything looks like it is made from the same rubbery clay.

however, it is well set out, fairly well textured, and decently lit.

made in blender? it looks to me (by the axis lines in the first screenshot) that they were taken in blender. it wouldn't surprise me if other software used the same axis lines but how about some in-game screenshots? like, how a6 would render them.

nice work,

julz

Thank you!

I agree the water tank. It does look like playdough. But when i make it transparent, can i apply refraction to it like real water?


Yes, i got that 45 fps ingame. Wat about the 2nd pic? the walls look empty, but a window wont look good there. I may need to arrage the objects a bit.

I made all of these in 3dsmax, thats how i made the soft shadows. I baked the textures with skylight. I will post more pics soon.

Thank you for replying!

My client also said to make things a bit "horror". Lights going off, eerie sounds etc.,any suggestions?

Your worrying for nothing the pictures look great, unless this is the only thing your user is going to see thoughout the whole game, the room is way more than fine, very detailed, well populated.

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a bit "horror"

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BLOOD!!!!