no oiffense, for a first try its okay, but this models doe snot really look like a human. add a little ventil on his head and you have a blow up doll, really.
thing is, the proportions are wrong. first, get them traight, then focus on teh rest. and the polygon count is too high for this quality, btu thats a learners thing. but the proportions are really off. unless he shoudl look like johnny bravo...