The enviornment if flippin creepy, is what I first noticed. Heres a few things I thought of as I played the game:
-The whole game might be a puzzle solver, but we could use more help on the first level. For example, it took me 10 minutes to find the door out of the first room. Something more noticable that red writing o nthe top would be better, I missed the part about right clicking too. A window possibly?
-The character is less than spectacular. His arms stick out too far and is animations are.... weird. I dont know how else to put it, maybe someone else can help?
-The level is too dark. Dark is good, but at least make the places you need to go illuminated so I'm not scaling the walls for 10 minutes...
-The combat system isnt good. I couldnt hit the guy. Maybe going into right click mode to click on the guy would be better, but I died at that point.
-Your hiding system doesnt work, or you need to explain it better. The guy found me right away.
-The games story launches straight into... corny. Not tryign to be offensive but I can't think of any other word (tacky maybe?) Starting wit hthe script, such things as "Oh A noise! A should go check it out." should be replaced. This makes an overall tacky feeling to the game (Do you know where "All your base are belong to us came from? Bad translation, but they'll have the same effect on the player... except we can at least understand yours.)
So much negative so far... Well, my kudos still go to you because this game was Very nicely done. I'm wondering why people arent jumping on this thread. They're probably too busy playing it.
+The games freakign creepy. I always regretted going into the next room (regardless that I didn't see any scary things as far as I got) But the enviornment... Candlelight only, no flashlight to let you see... it really adds up nicely. Very well done.
+The details you put into the level are awesome. Everythings examinable, looks nice, shadows are great... I can go on forever.
+Though the player could move slower, the script all worked nicely.
Good job and keep it up