Nice work ello, infact I like the very first screen the most. I have been playing Legacy of Kain: Defiance (aka Soul Reaver3) a lot lately, they have some very similar effects, really awesome. If you don't know the game, perhaps it's worth checking out to spark even more ideas, eventhough I'm sure you have plenty of those anyways, but still.
If you don't know the game, perhaps it's worth checking out to spark even more ideas, eventhough I'm sure you have plenty of those anyways, but still. 
