The style is oke but maybe you could spice up the graphics abit, real time grass sprites, increase the texture resolution abit, cartoon shader,... This all will +- not effect the performance when done properly

A remark for the camera, the camera should always follow the player and center its position in the middle of the screen. When in fps view, you're able to strafe and when in 3rd person view it isn't able any more which should be ^^
But in overall it looks quite promesing so far, keep up the effort and you will achieve the result you eventually wanted

Cheers
Frazzle