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I like it.

Thats... thats about all the useful criticism you can get from me as far as drawings are concerned. I'm sorry.

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I don't "feel" the fire. What I mean is that I dont recognize it as "hot".
But I have no freaking clue how to achieve that.
Maybe a higher contrast between fire and the rest of the image?




I tried to play around with its contrast, and I totally ruined it



Rats.

So that didn't work either, my post is still not very helpful. What now? Quick, think of something! Anything!

Uhm... the black things right behind her. Are those hurricanes or just some black things or what? It kind of looks cool, but I don't know what it is.

And... oh, forget it. It's too late. You can't be helpful in every post. You... you just can't.



actually. i think it looks pretty cool when you played around with it. gave it more depth and made the fire a bit more recognizable as hot. not to say that the origonal picture did not compare because theyre both equally awesome. just the fire looks more believable and i like the depth.


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