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ConceptArt
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03/10/08 20:00
03/10/08 20:00
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Gafgar
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Just because I'm still here and fixing the zombie game... and because I'm from time to time working on a little fighting game concept in 3DGS I will post a concept art for this fighting game I have been working on lately for a competition. This is actually my most serious attempt to make a full and finished image, and I am pretty happy with the result. But also I’m more than happy to take any critic and/or tips on how to make it better :] She is a fire Sorceress character that will mainly use here spells to attack with, even though she also will have a sword.
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Re: ConceptArt
[Re: frazzle]
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03/10/08 22:36
03/10/08 22:36
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Toast
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As it's a really awesome picture I only can complain about her head. It just doesn't fit to the rest of the character imo. Might be because of the too egg like shape which makes the hair look like a peruke...
Enjoy your meal Toast
Last edited by Toast; 03/10/08 22:36.
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Re: ConceptArt
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#187846
03/11/08 02:29
03/11/08 02:29
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I like it.
Thats... thats about all the useful criticism you can get from me as far as drawings are concerned. I'm sorry.
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I don't "feel" the fire. What I mean is that I dont recognize it as "hot". But I have no freaking clue how to achieve that. Maybe a higher contrast between fire and the rest of the image?
I tried to play around with its contrast, and I totally ruined it
Rats.
So that didn't work either, my post is still not very helpful. What now? Quick, think of something! Anything!
Uhm... the black things right behind her. Are those hurricanes or just some black things or what? It kind of looks cool, but I don't know what it is.
And... oh, forget it. It's too late. You can't be helpful in every post. You... you just can't.
actually. i think it looks pretty cool when you played around with it. gave it more depth and made the fire a bit more recognizable as hot. not to say that the origonal picture did not compare because theyre both equally awesome. just the fire looks more believable and i like the depth.
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