i like the eyebrow scar, and the eyes look better. i'm no pro, but i guess one idea would be to describe him in words. you'll probably find a lot of "medium" and "average" in there. what if he has bags under his eyes? his nose looks like it has been broken before? a receding hairline? slightly over-the-top sideburns? of course he'll be a less attractive character, but perhaps more recognisable. the balance is up to you. i am by no means asking for him to look like i just described :P

as he is, he's well done. with the changes you've done he's also fairly recognisable. maybe a little generic is a good thing, if you want it to be easier for the player to associate themselves with the main character.

i like what you've done with so few polys and the texture-work is great.

julz