I REALLY like the idea but it would be a thousand times better if there weren't some ppl who try to be "funny" and add sensless bullsh*t to the story -.-
well, I'm on the internet, what else should I expect...
edit: maybe you should make two seperate stories, one for all this sensless/funny/whatever stuff, and another storyline where the ppl have to confirm that they keep it serious and beliveable.