hi all, i just wrote my first song ( ) it took me for about 15 minutes to make and write it, so maybe it isn't perfect, but I felt like sharing it (i'm sorry for that ) so here it is:
please tell me what you think about it. (don't try to avoid the word "CRAP" ) you are allowed to "be inspirated" (copy whole parts) if you like and use it in your own song, but in that case I would like to hear the result.
) it took me for about 15 minutes to make and write it, so maybe it isn't perfect, but I felt like sharing it (i'm sorry for that 
) so here it is:
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