wow, these are better reactions than i expected
@inestical: i don't have experience with that, this is the very first song i made. could you recommend me any program for doing so?

what else should I improve?
I'm currently adding some notes to fill some gaps:
http://s24.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2R5XIZXB8BGUY23LGA6KMEYT2N
shouldn't I have done this? please tell me

as I said: the music is free to use

RJDL