Well first of all I wanna congratz you
it's look quite amazing really
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Now my C&C:
-the view where you can see the ammo of all your guns is abit
annoying, it's hanging there somewhere in midair so try and put the
view in a corner or sort like
![](/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif)
-The blood effects can be even 'worser', I mean that when you are hit or the enemy is been hit you could me him bleed like hell
![](/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif)
and that reminds me when your are shot, try to 'stick' the blood to the walls or
to sort like when it emerges out of a body
![](/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/laugh.gif)
-I think you could make the elevator even better, I don't really see the difference between the walls or the elevator, so try to make it look more like an elevator
![](/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif)
-For screen 15, try the give some more background creativity
![](/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/cool.gif)
-But for the rest IT'S like I already said, fanstastique !!!!!!
I hope your creative mind agrea's with my 'creative' mind
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Cheers
Frazzle