Well, first thing is first Ulillillia, congradulations to you for "finishing" your game. Ive actually been waiting for this to come out so I could see what youve been talking about all this time . Its cool that its finally finished, and out there for us to play.

That being said, ill get into the critique...

The Good:

Honestly, its pretty fun seeing how high you can jump... I spent a good 15 minutes trying different combinations of moves to get as high as unhumanly possible, and let me just say that I blew your city away . Couldnt even see it anymore, and the scaling is cool. Actually gives you the feeling that your are jumping REALLY high.

The graphics are very clean, and all of the animations for the character are nicely done. Its pretty impressive that theyre all 2D pic's.

The Bad:

Unfortunately, since its only the free version, I recieved errors galore. I understand that is because I have not paied yet, but it was just annoying . Not really a "bad" I guess...

Also, to be honest, it got a little boring after I could no longer get any higher . Sorry to hit you with that, but im gana be honset with you here.

The Ugly:

I know your gana hate me for this, but your UI... It is fairly confusing, and the white text, with the pale city visible in the background began to give me a headach.

Also, your tutorials are FAR more complex than they need to be. Your explaining height factors and scaling and all this, when I really just want to know..."how the heck do I jump." You made it far more technical that it needed ot be.

In conclusion, the game feels like you spent A LOT more time on the math aspect of the game, and you drone it into the players head as they are trying to figure out how to play. The game is good, and feels solid, from what I have played. However, I was left with a headach after reading all of that text, only to find the two words "left shift" nestled on one of the last pages .

The math seems to be solid as well. All the scaling does look nice, and the gameplay with without flaw (at least that I have seen).

As final words, the game is good, but is not without its shortcommings.

Good luck,
Raddaddy