She's a bit unbalanced at the moment. If I would draw something like this, I would have made her upper body a bit more fat. Perhaps increased the boobs too. Or you should make her taller. It feels the dimensions are not quite right.

However, having said all this, I couldn't do it better myself, so respect man!

Cheers


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