Head WIP

Hi looong time ago i dont be here, busy with work but now im still working on my 3d model skills ( or triying to get it).

This is a head i began today I need criticism about it.
it still blind and cant hear. the polycount is of 433.

Well it needs alot of improvement to make it look like a not deformed face
The chin is to long and the eyes look abit weird
But beside all my C&C, your on the right track

Cheers

Frazzle

There are several problems with the mesh. It isn't smooth. You have many curved surfaces that would look better if they were split into coplanar faces. The head looks chunky. Try to smooth him over.

Ok i Have smoothed it and fixed the eyes.
im working on ears.


Still waiting for your C&C

I think that it looks alot better than it did, I like the improvements. I still think it looks a bit odd, maybe if you were to stretch it a little bit vertically it would not look so odd. Just my opinion though.

i think it looks okay, but the cheeks are too big. they should be less wide than the eye funds.
apart from that it looks way better than MY first model
good luck with it

its smoother, but its too spherical to be a head.