M16 Weapon Mesh-pics

Hey, looking good. The only thing is, and I noticed it with your sci-fi gun, too - you're literally doing box modelling. The weapon looks sort of like a cardboard cut-out . Even a simple bevel on those edges would improve it a bit, but you need to get the hang of using depth on the sides of the model.
But aside from that, the silhouette looks great

So heres the final skined version I also modified the structure of the weapon a bit let me know what you think of it

Regards
Aztec

Wow, you made some great improvement

I remember what your first weapon looked like. This is very good progress!
Really, from just a few meters away, this would look great in game already! good work!!

If the detail on the side, at least some, would be skinned on, it would look even better though. I agree, don't do all of it, but maybe some...

On the top pic, the top handle thingy, in the front... lol. how do I explain what I mean?
Well, there'S a bit of white there, which kinda looks weird...

Keep it up!

Micha

Hey thx alot Germanunkol
I´ll correct that little withe thing
And I'll ad some details just as you said
I realy apreciate(spelling?) your comment
Regards
Aztec

EDIT:
here are some pics from WED and how it looks ingame

It's a bit blocky, but not bad...

thx xXxGuitar511

not bad so far. maybe you should make the back part more narrow... but not bad so far. i'm really looking foreward to the grenade launcher! (if you make one ;P )

Hey there good news I finaly managed to create my first organic thing its not very good but I Moddeled a hand for my gun wich will cary the weapon please tell me how you like it I need your tips to make it look better
heres the screenie

PS: Do you guys have any good skin for a hand and sorry for of the pic-size^^?

As a hand, not so well...

But for your FIRST organic model, and the fact that I've tried using wings and thats really not that easy to do [or at least for me], it's pretty good. Seriously. The only thing I really see wrong with the hand is the finger spacing [too far], the hand placement[DOES NOT GO THERE! lol], and the little bump on the bottom left where his wrist would [sorta] be...

oh yes thx I didnt see that little bump thing on his hand
thx for the tipps
youre helping me for getting to perfection
Regards
Aztec

Yeah, my main criticism is towards the hands position. The hand doesn't quite go on the mag [unless your reloading], it goes on the "ribbed thing on the barrel.

Hmm... it looks a bit flat. I don't know it that's the perspective, but the hand should be thicker closer to the wrist:

Some thought as Germanunkol, you really maded some progress aztek
The weapon with it his skin on looks oke but the organic modeling could be refined
I think your going to be a good modeling artist one day if you keep on practising

Cheers

Frazzle

Im very gratefull