a simple song

hi all,
i just wrote my first song ( ) it took me for about 15 minutes to make and write it, so maybe it isn't perfect, but I felt like sharing it (i'm sorry for that ) so here it is:

http://s24.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0YCODW4NFJCBO0PMKDGL2XJUXL

please tell me what you think about it. (don't try to avoid the word "CRAP" )
you are allowed to "be inspirated" (copy whole parts) if you like and use it in your own song, but in that case I would like to hear the result.

hope you like it

RJDL

I like it very much, even though it's a mid file, which stands for crap instruments basically lol.
It's very nicely composed, and with a few sterio instruments and ither things this can really sound nice Love it

-Lennart

I like it very much! some other thigs like bg beat and quitarr and it's awesome ;P

wow, these are better reactions than i expected
@inestical: i don't have experience with that, this is the very first song i made. could you recommend me any program for doing so?

what else should I improve?
I'm currently adding some notes to fill some gaps:
http://s24.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2R5XIZXB8BGUY23LGA6KMEYT2N
shouldn't I have done this? please tell me

as I said: the music is free to use

RJDL

I don't know many progs, but I have used Fruity Loops, maybe you should check it out, or I know, that Sam has better ideas, don't you

I don't know what program you used to make this, but I have used "Modplug tracker" in the past. Pretty neat program, but the possibilities are limited because of the Midi structure (can't do any good reverb or anything of course, and the samples are really poor).

Since a few months, I'm using Cubase. You can make some really nice things with this program Although it uses midi imput, you can use Real wav samples, which ofcourse makes all your songs sound loads better!

Good luck!
-Lennart

Don't lose your dongle if you have Cubase. I did.

any commands or crits on the song?

made it bit longer:
http://rapidshare.de/files/8393539/EIGEN5.MID.html

hey i heard it, not bad... very creative

I like the first one Very much...
disn't care for the second.

I like the first as it is "much more simple".


In fact if I can I will use it in my project.
It fits perfectly into an Adventurous Enviroemnt.
I remind me of The feel I got When I tried Game Studio
for the first time and ran the Office Demo level.

It reminds me of the music from office Demo
that has that mucic that....

" that just gives you that warm and happy feeling"

I love it and its small in size too!


Definately keep up the good work!


*** Teutonic Darkness ***

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I don't know many progs, but I have used Fruity Loops, maybe you should check it out,

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I agree with Whine. Fruity Loops has everything you'll ever need to make a professional song. I swear, it totally brought mine to life. Check it out as soon as you can. You won't regret it. Also, if you plan on buying it, don't buy the producer edition, but, buy the fruity edition. It will have everything you'll need. The Standard edition won't help you if your song has chords so, that's why I bought the Fruity Edition . Only $99 too!

Good luck RJDL .