Check project and give advices [unpaid]

I need some one to check my current project (FPS), I've done movement and weapons part, and sometimes I'm having problems with fps.
All I need is someone's advices, how to make it work better and faster, I'm pretty sure, that most of thing I've done aren't done in best way.
This will really help me to learn, also I'll learn to write scripts in a right way. Any way, project isn't finished yet. Waiting for replies.

Contact: ICQ 581003459, or just PM me.

I could test it

I'll send u a beta version a bit later bro. But I need more than testing, I need someone look through the whole script.
So may be, some errors (which are ok for me, cause simply don't see them) may be found and some on.
I'll be happy if u'll test it and find may be some bugs In next few days I'll send u it.

I would also help
Do you have Instant messenger?

I have ICQ, check the first post.