Would anyone trade this?

I am trading some of the Z-systems and have read the black book now a few times (just ordered the 3rd edition too). I am new to this so to try and get started i modified one of Alice's systems. Would anyone trade this? Appreciate any suggestions! Use Oanda

Yes, why not?

the equity curve is smooth so I just thought I must have done something wrong

You could try to optimize the entry, Entry = 0.25*ATR(20) or something.

thanks, will try that