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Head WIP #95410
10/22/06 09:37
10/22/06 09:37
Joined: May 2005
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eyebird Offline OP
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Hi looong time ago i dont be here, busy with work but now im still working on my 3d model skills ( or triying to get it).

This is a head i began today I need criticism about it.
it still blind and cant hear. the polycount is of 433.







Last edited by eyebird; 10/22/06 09:38.
Re: Head WIP [Re: eyebird] #95411
10/22/06 11:25
10/22/06 11:25
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Well it needs alot of improvement to make it look like a not deformed face
The chin is to long and the eyes look abit weird
But beside all my C&C, your on the right track

Cheers

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Re: Head WIP [Re: eyebird] #95412
10/22/06 17:29
10/22/06 17:29
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Nashua New Hampshire
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There are several problems with the mesh. It isn't smooth. You have many curved surfaces that would look better if they were split into coplanar faces. The head looks chunky. Try to smooth him over.


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Re: Head WIP [Re: anonymous_alcoho] #95413
10/23/06 05:26
10/23/06 05:26
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eyebird Offline OP
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Ok i Have smoothed it and fixed the eyes.
im working on ears.


Still waiting for your C&C

Re: Head WIP [Re: eyebird] #95414
10/23/06 17:26
10/23/06 17:26
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I think that it looks alot better than it did, I like the improvements. I still think it looks a bit odd, maybe if you were to stretch it a little bit vertically it would not look so odd. Just my opinion though.


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Re: Head WIP [Re: themgsman] #95415
10/23/06 20:58
10/23/06 20:58
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Netherlands
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i think it looks okay, but the cheeks are too big. they should be less wide than the eye funds.
apart from that it looks way better than MY first model
good luck with it

Re: Head WIP [Re: RJDL] #95416
10/23/06 22:05
10/23/06 22:05
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its smoother, but its too spherical to be a head.


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