haha, but if he wanted to go chibi/SD style, he'd have to make the body kinda wobbly, and have alot less polygons, and less "figure" to it, but lol phoemox ^^

@ Ex_Citer

"BEcause she has no "wimpern" (these hairs around the eyes)". You mean eyelashes? If so, youre right, Ill put them in. If you dont mean eyebrows, tell me.

"and some forms on her head like her jaw are too straight instead of round". Do you mean the whole jaw silhouette or the sides of the jaw that meet the ear? Or the bottom of the chin? What other forms on her head dont look right?

"Well the corner of the jaw should be lower", your absolutly right, I'll change it.

@Spike

"i like teh body, but i dont ike the head. in fact, the head is ugly, not from a modeling point of view, but if a chick that looks like this wants me, ill start laughing". Tell me exactly what dosent make her face attractive, Id like to know.

"i also think that u could scale the head a lil' bit down"

" as spike said, the head is too big and not realy cute". Tell me how to make her cute

"if you want her to look anime style, shrink her head a bit"

Definitly, her head is way too big, and I should change the proportions of the body to accomadate for the head.

Im hoping she wont become another perfect proportioned, perfect specimen after changing her looks too much to make her cute.

Yes Ex_citer, I was the one who made that "suspender" female model. She's currently being animated for my platformer game

Yes, I mean eyelashes.

About the jaw. Straight strong forms (lines) are for males things, not just for the body, for everything (for example weapons like shields, and spears).
Round soft forms are for everything what should look female, like water bottle for example.


To make her more cute add eyelashes, edit the jaw and make the head smaller. Depending on her age, the head should fit 8 times (<- head+7heads) into the body (body includes the head). I mean if she is 18+ her head should fit 8 times. I mean she is 8 heads high. If younger less times. I know there are also other formulas for the number of heads. There are also different arrangements in which head high what starts/ends (breast, belly, groin, knees etc.). Best is if you know all formulas and use them, when you think they are needed.

And in the end, never forget what you want. I would like to see the "suspender" female again

nice modelling but you shouls weld the vertices at the "symmetrical line" it looks a bit weird

@ex citer:

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Yes, I mean eyelashes.

About the jaw. Straight strong forms (lines) are for males things, not just for the body, for everything (for example weapons like shields, and spears).
Round soft forms are for everything what should look female, like water bottle for example.


To make her more cute add eyelashes, edit the jaw and make the head smaller. Depending on her age, the head should fit 8 times (<- head+7heads) into the body (body includes the head). I mean if she is 18+ her head should fit 8 times. I mean she is 8 heads high. If younger less times. I know there are also other formulas for the number of heads. There are also different arrangements in which head high what starts/ends (breast, belly, groin, knees etc.). Best is if you know all formulas and use them, when you think they are needed.

And in the end, never forget what you want. I would like to see the "suspender"...

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nach dem kommentar möchte ich wissen ob du einen eckigen penis hast.

WEGROFL

Sry, couldn´t resist

GS_Raphael: A photo is less information as a good drawing.

GS_Raphael: I think the straight, strong form he was mentioning would apply there....unless I'm mistaken in my translation

never mind - it was just a joke

but lets end this offtopic conversation.

back to topic:
did you fixed the seam allready?