Absolutely professional work. To tell if itīs good or bad I would need to play it.
The grafics and sounds are very good. I hope in the other levels are more plants and water. Otherwise it feels very dead.
The sounds are very good. If you had a team I would add some variations to the skeletons with some switchable random armor pieces and weapons (attached to a bone).
Now I donīt know anything about the concept of the game. I mean is it a serious "history" lesson or is it supposed to be funny? Because it looks like it is funny. I would keep it like that, because a serious greek action game is nothing new. If itīs cartoony like now (espacially the attack on medusa
) I like it very much and it makes the game interesting. Like duke nukem, I would be playing for the next gag. Some gags are bigger some are smaller. For example a small gag could be one liners, like "Wow, am I in the stone age here?!" or "These are some HARD GUYS!" or "YOU ROCK, GUYS!!!" or "Your fashion rocks!". "You look like you are stoned." would be funny aswell, but I am not sure if drug jokes wouldnīt redeem the sales.
Big gags could be simply by funny movements and actions, in cutscenes and in bossbattles, like in the beginning of the medusa battle.
You know my games sell because of sexy movements/scenes, god of war sells because of cruel movements/scenes and your game could sell because of funny stuff.
Well, what I want to say, you may planned to make a simply and serious good game. But you can do more, and that is what makes the difference. The concept.
EDIT: I forgot something important! The logo presentation of your company whatsoever. I am a german. And I donīt like if something is not correct.
If you call your company 3D HORIZON, and the logo title thing splash screen is animated, the logo HAS TO COME out of the horizon. Something like, first I see a white screen, then a HORIZONTAL black line is cutting through the screen. Then the name is "born" out of the horizont. And if itīs born out of a horizon it means:
- Horizon is a line which splitts something into two parts. Into a ground and into a sky.
- Horizon is something very far away
- so if the title is born out of the horizon,
1.) it must be clipped by the lower shape of the line, if itīs overlaying,
2.) and it has to be small and comming closer because itīs far away
