can you stop bashing gays in my thread? make a gay bashing thread i can boycott or something... jesus... conservatives-.-

well, those trakcs are mixed one by me and one by my baby. we have a professional mixing the final version, so maybe you stay tuned?

Not that that your music is really the style of music I will listen to everyday but the song itself was relaxing in a way
Besides, making music is hard Spike, I can only be jealous about this, in a positive way that is

Cheers

Frazzle

Not bad Spike, certainly a different style. Thought the piano was the stronger point. I had trouble making out the words though, maybe raise the voice track higher, or perhaps this was intended. Either way, keep it up, music takes many many years of practice, and it'll only get better.

And my soul from out that shadow that lies floating on the floor
Shall be lifted - nevermore!

Sorry, couldn't resist to quote edga allen poe after reading Azurite doing it D8

I like the song, and i like the voice even more. The only problem i see is that the song is quite monotonic like people mentioned before allready.

Also i was scared when i clicked on the link, that some hardcore metal will come up or something But now, it's newwave/darkwave/whatever, which is really cool

Keep it on!

@ that caveman from page 1:

Simpleton. Of course I shouldn't.
It would be a tremendous waste of intelligence.

I prefer to do things that require at least a bit of talent.
(Even if I'm an untrained singer, that will come in time.)
Scrubbing the floor doesn't count. Even my moron cats can do that, and unintentionally, too.

Some English lessons from a German speaker for you: "Gay" is a synonym for "happy".
Are you emo or why would that be derogatory to you?

@ The rest: Thanks again. We'll have a friend who's a professional sound technician give us better software and show us the most important things. We have no clue about professional mastering so far, so that was the best we could do on our own. It wasn't intended to be more than a demo for now.

edit: Post deleted , those were too personal views to be posting on a game development forum , I was just bothered by the "caveman" reference.

If you've just meant that first post humorously, then I take the caveman back.

Otherwise I stand by my opinion.

Still, thanks for your second post regarding the music.

so, i sat down and tweaked the mix a little bit...
you can listen to it here:
http://www.myspace.com/aidennqueen and its called A Story Untold Spike Version
wich can also be downloaded as mp3 here! (rightclick and save as)

enjoy^^

I think the "Spike Version" sounds better... but thats just me