Hi @ all!
Thinking about a new projekt I got the idea to create a starship as world for a ego-shooter.I think about a lot of rooms as hangar,engine-room,weapons-room,holo-deck and more.Here a few shots from the central-room.I used a construction from STMC-Download for the beginning and converted it to a level.It took me 4 weeks creating all the models.The cyborgs are not finished and I will create more detailed textures later.

not bad for a start, but there's lots of things to improve:

-textures are blurry/distorted (3rd picture, on the left, next to the door) and have seams (first image, floor)
-what I find weird is that the players will never be able to get up onto the higher parts of the room, there's no stairs anywhere.
-if you use star trek parts, maybe you should decide on the star trek style, or else not use star trek parts at all.
-all the scaling seems weird. the textures compared to the chairs and bots... the floor texture is very large compared to the bots.
-the star trek style together with this floor and the bots looks very weird to me...


this is just constructive criticism, i'm not saying it's bad, just keep at it!

Micha

It looks really nice but I agree with Germanunkol. Could you also make a close up of the bots, they look very cool but it's hard to see in your pictures. The bots also kinda look like they came from the tv show Battlestar Galactica. Anyway keep up the good work.

Have a nice day,
Molotov.

that looks like you took a galaxy class bridge and took it to bits then stuck it back togather without knowing were all the bits should go, textures are wrong for the floor and walls, support beams should not have those spikes at all, were did you say you got the origanel mesh from?

it's a good start, but i still can't get over the Star Trek textures...

i also agree with Germanunkol

if i may also mention, on your website you are selling a game that includes some copyrighted content.....you really can't do that, it's illegal, it's the one with the xwing flying through the planets....

First thanks for your responses! I will try to make it better.Perhaps I'll create a complete new one.
@mpdeveloper
What exactly do you mean with "illegal"? I do not sell the game Galaxy,it's freeware ! Only the screensaver "Starflight-3d" is for sell and I don't know,what copyrighted contents there should be.

well the x-wing fighter would be the copyrighted material mp is refering to, you can`t sell stuff which is copyrighted, best to make your own ship for that screensaver

Ok,but looking the screensaver ,you see a cockpit build by my own and not a XWing!!!
And if I'm not allowed to show a XWing,I'm also not allowed to show a Ferrary,Mercedes and perhaps nothing!I can't believe that!

yeah, your not allowed to. why do you think only the big companies can use those cars in there games? because the licenses cost hundreds of thousands of dollars to aquire.

And this is the same for freeware?