Sorry I can't say more
but.. I'll say the same as everyone else:
Nice work, looks very professional. I hope it all goes well for you and you have a successfull release at Christmas.
A few minor issues (which have already been mentioned). But apart from that good work!
(Although I didn't understand much of the storyline, sounded interesting, wanted me to find out more. The narrator really built up tension well and made me want to play the game).
Can't wait to see a demo (that is of course, if you make one
).