Pretty nice model, thou... I would say that it would need more pale skin and over all more pail colours, smaller head and longer arms... though only a little longer arms, but I can be this view. But I doubt it... and judging from the images you posted he would still need a little more girly look in his face ;D
I wish I had the time to create some models.. -_-.. is almost a year since I had time to model a series model... o_o...
Good work any way ^^, the thing I think it needs the most is the more pale tuned colours… but that is probably because I love the graphical style of the FF7 movie ^^