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Re: Goblin character contest [WARNING GOBLIN NUDITY]: [Re: TheShooter] #372362
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Yes, its much better indeed (the weapons are placeholders, so they are just fine).
I would overwork the red (leather?!) armor on his chest a bit, the white scratches look a bit wrong. Maybe a lighter or darker red?


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Re: Goblin character contest [WARNING GOBLIN NUDITY]: [Re: WretchedSid] #372367
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Thanks Guys !
It's far from pro artists, and it has some glitches and imprecise textures or distortions areas due to retouch model like Re UV of the barcelets , an re paint on normal map in bracelets instead of a good Normal map generation (i didn't succed in reset it on barcelets Area by painting).
But well better than Low poly iphones ones !

@Just Sid :
Yes i agree some critics, helped make it better specially on the skin color.I'm not pro at scratches, but i'll try another
red if i have time tonight.
If you have some other critics on colors don't hesitate ot bring them on laugh !






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Re: Goblin character contest [WARNING GOBLIN NUDITY]: [Re: ratchet] #372375
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Nice one ratchet. Nice contribution.

Imo you should start another model while you are warmed up, i am sure it will be a lot better than this one.


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Re: Goblin character contest [WARNING GOBLIN NUDITY]: [Re: ratchet] #372379
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does look much better now. you might also want to desaturate that leather a little or something because right now it is a little redder than i'd picture it. but then again thats just personal preferences. as far as the poly's go you missed one spot where you really needed more and thats the top of the head. right now its a really harsh sharp edge, you might want to split it up just a little bit more to get a better sillouhette. the last little thing i might critic is that you might want to somehow layer over some details on the textures..

again, all preferences, but i thought i might suggest them.

Re: Goblin character contest [WARNING GOBLIN NUDITY]: [Re: lostclimate] #372380
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@Quadraxas :
I would like to see your good 3D skills laugh
@losticmate :
I'll put naother brighte Red color , for the head i'll add more polyongs and smooth it. For details on textures why not doing some hand paint on the baked normal map texture ?
I 'm not skilled at texturing.

Re: Goblin character contest [WARNING GOBLIN NUDITY]: [Re: ratchet] #372385
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decided to make an aum 100 as well, and that i'd make one that goes with yours. if you'd like i can zip an obj file and the textures so you can see what your model looks like holding it.:


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(the next one has a slight uv issue, its a pre-final version that is kinda early in the exporting process.)


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hope its not too violent for the style of your model grin


EDIT: btw, im not sure... would this be considered next gen/current gen

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Re: Goblin character contest [WARNING GOBLIN NUDITY]: [Re: lostclimate] #372392
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@ratchet, either you did not understand my post, or i dont understand yours. I never said anything about my 3d skills, i just said your model is good, if you start another one you can make a better one with the stuff you learned while doing the goblin model.


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Re: Goblin character contest [WARNING GOBLIN NUDITY]: [Re: Quad] #372521
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@Quadraxas:
Yes, sorry i didn't understand. Indeed, all critics will only can me progress a little more.

@Losticmate:
Great laugh
Perhaps you could find a free shield on the Net and just repaint it a little , because the goblin was animated with it, but heven with that weapon it will be already great !

Re: Goblin character contest [WARNING GOBLIN NUDITY]: [Re: ratchet] #372524
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how about these?


Re: Goblin character contest [WARNING GOBLIN NUDITY]: [Re: MrGuest] #372528
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Great MrGuest.
The Goblin is ready for battle now laugh

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