Hí,
it is a great project and I can't wait to get this book
But I have to say, that your book is out of balance - why?
The book has 23 Chapters but only one chapter is dedicated to scripting!
Ok, Game Physic is a scripting part, too - but why would you introduce physics before scripting?
Most of the gameplay is in the code, if you stick to the templates - you will not be
able to earn a lot of money with that game.
Maybe you need to change the order in your table of contents.
-- slacer
