I believe what you might be saying, although badly wrote, is that i have not gone in to detail how the game will play out.
That pretty much sums up your document. What you have is a synopsis of the first HP book. It contains no unique or original information, nothing that you can say "I came up with that. That is my original idea."
In short, all your document is saying is: "I want to make a Harry Potter game."
That's it. Everything else is a summary.
And as for the HP IP, all I can say is tKarma's a bitch. If you don't respect other peoples IP, people will not respect your's. And if you make it that far, in time when you come up with something original you won't have a leg to stand on when others rip off your ideas for their purposes.
