The sound is good, imo. Many indie films fail in how they record. So you seemed to have done well there. But the video itself? I agree with PadMalcom ... the initial scene with the person running is way too long. I was getting bored watching it. A bit of editing would make this scene move faster and add a better sense of urgency for the viewer.

But even the scene where the man wakes up and walks through the woods ... I was bored. I got it pretty quickly. He's in the woods and does not know why he is there. He's lost. Fine. But don't make me watch for another three minutes telling me the same thing (that he's lost in the woods). The viewer gets it.