Nice story Stans. The dialogue would be a bit hard for the ESL students, but lots of good situation comedy in there.

Spike and Inestical, what you have written is more like a synopsis than a story. Don't be discouraged, though. Have another try.

I found a couple of interesting links for RPG story writing today. Perhaps they will give some of you inspiratoin to make an entry:

https://eduforge.org/frs/?group_id=72
Try the RPG Storyteller Example

Also, a nice tutorial about making RPG fantasy stories:
http://www.kirupa.com/developer/actionscript/gamestory.htm

Please read the first post in this thread so you know what to write about.