The idea is fine, however...
It doesn't look very good at all, next that there are too few screens:
-Poor lightning, only the pool has a light
-poor level design, all roofs on the same hights, just some simple blocks. I bet the "SHOP" is consisting of blocks too, make a model instead, way better.
-poor texture placement, in the corners the texture doesn't fit to the other block. The water doesn't look like water at all, since it is not transparant, and just a standard water texture.
It could use a lot of improvement.
EDIT:
@Angel: why do you showcase your own WIP house in someone elses show-off threat?
Last edited by Jostie; 10/07/06 16:03.